Points of improvement:
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The presentation time was only 3', which means that you can add more focused relevant examples and background information that will lead you more
effectively to your research question.
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As discussed, the topic and the title are at the moment too broad and therefore need to be narrowed down. For example, instead of investigating who/what
influenced Banksy, you could search if and how he influenced contemporary graphic design.
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The same applies to the research question.
- The reference list and the bibliography should be listed separately. Also, the references should be properly written according to the APA style.
Based on this feedback i have edited my presentation. I have changed my title and research question to be more fitting.
Title:
'Banksy; his influences and impact on contemporary graphic design'
Research Question:
'Has Banksy influenced contemporary graphic design and how might his work have had an impact?'
I have also re done my referencing and found more references using summon and google scholar.
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