In this seminar we were given feedback on the conclusions of our essays.
The whole point of the conclusion is to summarise the essay but it is essential to use different words, otherwise you end up just repeating yourself which is pointless.
We were told to write down 5 key words that summarise our essays, and to make sure all of these key words were in our conclusion. My key words were; branding, fashion, beauty, magazine and bloggers of which i had used all words.
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